Anyone got a second for a quick edit before i submit to Lew?

Public School Educators: A Sorry lot of Saps

Well, my tenure with public education is through, and I would be a sorry libertarian if I didn’t reflect upon the state of affairs I’ve seen while teaching seventh grade mathematics. As a disclaimer, credit is not without due. There are heroes in our schools who deserve the tip of our hat. They are talented individuals who enjoy their job and bring countless smiles to the little faces that walk into their classroom.

Of course, the dilemma is that any public school teacher reading those lines will smile with an air of self-importance. Educators seem to naturally swoop up any broad complements and outsource all criticisms. Indeed, modesty is not a common trait within the classroom. The majority of public school educators, within their mind, are Mr. Holland’s in due of their Opus. They are benefactors…philanthropists…Gondi’s of society. If for some reason you find yourself not going anywhere for awhile, just inquire these individuals opinions on education or child philosophy, unwrap your snickers, and listen to the sounds of normatives spilling from their omniscient mind. The world is their classroom! Never have you witnessed such an extensive array of platitudes and head bobbing till you have taken seat at public school faculty meeting.

They are a sorry lot of saps for sure, yet, not being without my share of arrogance, let me serve some of my opinions of the mishaps within our school system.

Exposure, not Mastery

Somewhere in route, the field of education substituted quantity of classes for quality of classes. Education has become a walkthrough; a cursory glance at the subjects. Our leaders are obsessed with exposure, not mastery. Students finish three or more years of high school math with little to no retention. These individuals must then spend the first few years of college paying for remedial math classes. Certainly I’m not knocking the need for Algebra or Geometry; they are vital subjects of study and many of the students who struggle in college are the ones who possess the weakest quantitative skills. Yet, the solution is mastery not exposure.

It is my opinion that an eighth grade education of mathematics, in which the student surveys and masters the basics of statistics, algebra, geometry and arithmetic, would easily prepare a student for college liberal arts mathematics; much more so then three years of additional high school math given the average percentage of retention. In time, with this trend in rushing of exposure, our middle school students will be dabbling in integrals and derivatives as they hear, not learn calculus. It is quite an unfunny joke.

The Pretense of Knowledge

Yes, Hayek’s pretense of knowledge cannot be any more apparent then within our nearly 100,000 publicly controlled schools throughout our nation. Each school, with its vast arrays of diversity in geography, funding, community, parent presence, academic ability, salary, etc, is governed from the same men, wearing the same black suits, with the same American flag pin. Each, from the comforts of their Mont Blanc pen delegates what they believe to be priorities.

After years of failed attempts these talking heads now believe they have found the recipe for educational success.

  • Just sprinkle a little bit of emphasis on student proficiency
  • coupled with perks for those who show progress
  • add a pinch of math targeting.
  • Finally set some arbitrary pass rates
  • And… cook until burned!

What’s in an Age?

Age seems too arbitrary of a characteristic to be the focal point of learning. Again, what’s with the ambiguity? If were simply going to choose an arbitrary characteristic for clustering students, why not choose hair color, IQ or height? At least if you clustered students based on height you would probably have less bullying within the classroom.

Why not cluster based on ability?

Sure it may be weird to have a 13 year-old learning 4th grade math, but only because the 13 year-old believes he should be with other 13 year-olds. You may have a 4th grade math room with a mixture of 6-13 year-olds, whereas a 13 year old may feel behind, but this same individual may be in an 11th grade English room and feel as they are advanced. It would certainly require much restructure and the elimination of many of the educational taboos—and certainly not without the “yeah, but what about…” questions but at least it would be a better system of deciphering learning.

Lower (if not eliminate) all College Requirements for Teaching Primary Education

You don’t need them to be a good teacher.

Currently, the average teacher maintains five years of education coupled with a semester of student-teacher training. In addition, teachers must continue their training efforts (be it through college classes, workshops, lectures or book readings) in order to maintain their teacher licensure. Imagine a replacement teacher with less required educational barriers of entry to compare to our existing teacher.

To form a successful teaching lesson, one that is characterized by student learning and information retention takes a compilation of experience, training and preparation time—of which experience is most significant. Of the following mentioned, our replacement teacher falls short in one category: training.

It may be contested that a degree in education also contributes toward experience. Yet, for those who have had the luxury of watching a newly inexperienced educator fresh out of his or her program for the first time in the classroom can attest, education degrees offer little in terms of experience.

In reality teachers are overqualified given the nature of their work. It is within all likelihood that individuals of lesser education may choose to work year-round for the same pay or work the same hours for less salary. Furthermore, given that the supply of potential teachers would increase as barriers of entry decrease, it is also within all likelihood that increased competition would translate into increased learning.

In conclusion, my tenure in the arena of public schools has convinced that my child can only receive an education from the wall of my own home. Even a part-time home school education would set your child miles apart from his peers.

I’ll give it a look. 1st thing though, I’m not sure if “swoop up” is proper usage, maybe swoop down upon? It seems like it would be better to say “scarf up”.

I’ve been told I come off as a jerk when I edit papers. So, sorry. Also my suggestions may not be correct. I have only an intuitive grasp of the english language. In addition to grammar, I’ve also included stylistic suggestions. Take it all with a grain of salt because you have a great idea here.

No apostrophe

My stylistic preference for commas instead of dots. Also Gondi = Ghandi? Alternate spelling probably.

individuals’

Stylistically, I would have written: investigate the common philosophies of child education.

Make this its own sentence. MindS

a public school faculty meeting

They are a sorry lot of saps for sure. My arrogance aside (style), let me voice some of my opinions on the pitfalls of our schooling.

comma not semicolon

no comma. suggestion: The solution is mastery rather than more general exposure.

It might be just me, but I had to re-read this several times. I thought you were going to propose a better plan for education here.

Is this the current state of affairs or one you are advocating?

So its good enough for liberal arts… I don’t understand what you’re saying about additional high school math and retention though.

instead of saying “vast arrays” could try “highly variable”

You should at least pay lip service to the idea that schools are controlled locally. Parents get involved… local governments decide who the administrators should be in some states, but your point is that the feds really control education in its essentials.

Great tag

questions comma. allow students to progress at their own pace.

Maybe include a “moving at the speed of the slowest wheel” metaphor?

Or really not qualified at all… degree mills ftl.
You might point out that there are a lot of really qualified people who won’t be teachers their whole life, but teaching high school students would be a great part time job for them. As an engineer, this would be great. I know math/science and students are poor. I won’t be a teacher when I graduate but there are so many college undergrads that it won’t matter. Some people are great teachers with no training at all. You can pick the best of the best.

This made me think of a child staring at brick walls :stuck_out_tongue: Consider blackboard instead of wall

Gondi = Ghandi ?

these individual**'**s opinions

apostrophe

child philosophy

child psychology?

unwrap your snickers, and listen to the sounds of normatives spilling from their omniscient mind. The world is their classroom! Never have you witnessed such an extensive array of platitudes and head bobbing till you have taken seat at public school faculty meeting.

Capitalize Snickers, change “taken seat at” to “taken your seat at” or just “sat at” is better style-wise.

I saw Sieben’s post and I realized I would probably be repeating some, but I might catch more.

Thank you both for all your help. I tend to overlook things so easily.

YW, yes some of these are basic but it’s okay. I found more but I am distracted with some other stuff. Give me like 15-30 mins.

Looks like Sieben did a pretty good job with this. Good luck with it!

Yes, Hayek’s pretense of knowledge cannot be any more apparent then within our nearly 100,000 publicly controlled schools

then >> than

Each school, with its vast arrays of diversity in geography, funding, community, parent presence, academic ability, salary, etc, is governed from the same men, wearing the same black suits, with the same American flag pin.

period after “etc.” Is there some way to make this 2 sentences or delete some stuff? You might need a semicolon, I am also not an expert at English.

Each, from the comforts of their Mont Blanc pen delegates what they believe to be priorities.

I want to say you shouldn’t italicize a brand name, even though it is a foreign word, but could be wrong.

After years of failed attempts these talking heads now believe they have found the recipe for educational success.

  • Just sprinkle a little bit of emphasis on student proficiency
  • coupled with perks for those who show progress
  • add a pinch of math targeting.
  • Finally set some arbitrary pass rates
  • And… cook until burned!

What perks? What is math targeting? I’m not sure many people know that term.

What’s in an Age?

Age seems too arbitrary of a characteristic to be the focal point of learning. Again, what’s with the ambiguity? If were simply going to choose an arbitrary characteristic for clustering students, why not choose hair color, IQ or height? At least if you clustered students based on height you would probably have less bullying within the classroom.

Why not cluster based on ability?

I like this title/idea/point too.

Is ambiguity the right word? Maybe just delete that sentence.

“If were” >> we’re

t may be contested that a degree in education also contributes toward experience. Yet, for those who have had the luxury of watching a newly inexperienced educator fresh out of his or her program for the first time in the classroom can attest, education degrees offer little in terms of experience.

comma between educator and fresh

In reality teachers are overqualified given the nature of their work. It is within all likelihood that individuals of lesser education may choose to work year-round for the same pay or work the same hours for less salary. Furthermore, given that the supply of potential teachers would increase as barriers of entry decrease, it is also within all likelihood that increased competition would translate into increased learning.

comma after reality

delete furthermore

In conclusion, my tenure in the arena of public schools has convinced that my child can only receive an education from the wall of my own home. Even a part-time home school education would set your child miles apart from his peers.

add “me” after convinced

“home school” is one word? Alternatively, change “Even a part-time home school education” to “Even part-time home schooling”

“miles” could be removed or rework the end for a bigger finish




My opinion. I like some parts, but am not overwhelmed by it. I would say fix the errors, read it to yourself out loud, revise some parts and put it up again for a final proofread.