new discoveries surrounding the drafting of the declaration of Independence....

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new discoveries surrounding the drafting of the declaration of Independence…

http://www.google.com/hostednews/ap/article/ALeqM5gPrsFQ9oTgvG87hzuGIQPgal6KqQD9GN4I6G0

http://myloc.gov/Education/OnlineActivities/ExhibitObjects/DecOfIndependenceOnlineActivity.aspx

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The sentence structures in the draft are clumsy, wordy, unpoetic, and don’t flow smoothly compared to the final. The final seems to be an an entirely different writing style than the daft. Could it be that someone other than Jefferson provided the editing?