Leonidia:
Thank you for your reply and acknowledgement of some of the problems I was trying to point out.
Before I address your counter-example, I want to be clear that I do not necessarily believe that Professor Long will want to make the changes or adjustments you propose or recommend. If we assume Professor Long has been thinking and writing about ethics theory for fifteen or twenty years or more, we have to assume that he has a fair grasp of the nuances of his own theory, and a certain capacity to recognize the implications of various adjustments to his theory and/or its explication. He may see implications of your proposed changes that you do not see. It’s easy for you to recommend changes to the presentation of Professor Long’s theory. You have less of a personal stake if the proposed changes should lead to further problems, and maybe even worse problems. At least I assume you have less of a personal stake.
Below are some of the problems I believe would still exist even if Professor Long were to adopt your proposed changes. Let’s call your proposed changes Proposed Changes #1. If the problems I point out below have merit and/or are valid, then it is possible you or someone else will want to advance Proposed Changes #2. But if this occurs, I say we are now essentially revising Long’s theory and/or its explication from what he himself would present. Then we’re arguing about the theory of various revisors of Long, and no longer about Long’s theory as he would conceive it or present it.
My proposed solution is that I outline what I consider to be some problems that still exist even with your Proposed Changes #1. If you think they have no merit and/or are not valid, then this means all Long has to do is revise his presentation as you recommend. If my criticism(s) has merit and/or is valid, this means we may need Proposed Changes #2. Then, we are heading away from Long’s theory as he would present it. In either case, we needn’t debate endlessly. Either Long can consider adjusting the examples where he has previously discussed constitutive means along the lines of what you suggest, if that is all it takes to fix things. Or, in the case where Proposed Changes #2 may be needed, then we can possibly agree that the revisions are becoming extensive enough that Professor Long would need to assent to these further changes you or someone may propose in the presentation of his theory.
In short, my original critique was of Long’s theory as it was presented in the passage in question. At this point, I would prefer not to debate a follower’s or supporter’s revised version of Long’s theory.
Here is your counter-example:
“A better example would be:
Playing this chord here is an internal means to giving an accurate rendition of the Moonlight Sonata because it makes no sense to say “I wish I could give an accurate rendition of the Moonlight Sonata without having to play this chord here.” Therefore this chord here is a constitutive means of giving an accurate rendition of the Moonlight Sonata.”
In your counter-example, the phrase “this chord here” could have at least two possible meanings. It could mean “this chord here” in the sense of “this chord I am about to play.” Or it could mean “this chord here” in the sense of “this chord I now play,” where we conceive that I no longer have a choice in the matter, because the chord is in fact being played now.
If the phrase this chord here is given a precise or rigorous meaning or definition, this may lead to or necessitate further clarifications. For example, if the meaning of “this chord here” is this chord now played, and A has no choice in the matter, then the possibility exists that the theory envisions a series of such played chords where A has no choice in the matter, so that the Moonlight Sonata somehow “plays itself” through A without A’s choice.
If this is deemed an inadequate conception of things, then the idea of choice might have to be introduced into the theory or its presentation and examples. Doing so might complicate Long’s theory.
If this chord here means “this chord I am about to play,” then A has the option of playing it or not. This might complicate Long’s theory.
Here are a few other challenges that Long’s theory of constitutive means and/or the way Long has presented his theory may be confronted with:
Since the future is uncertain, no one knows whether person A will play all the rest of the notes of the Moonlight Sonata after playing this chord here.
What song A plays depends on the notes he plays after this chord here. He may play the first 47 chords of the Moonlight Sonata, and decide that the 48th chord—this chord here—will be the first chord of a new song.
Thus it is not necessarily true that: “Therefore this chord here is a constitutive means of giving an accurate rendition of the Moonlight Sonata.” This chord here might be the beginning of a new song. We don’t know for sure. Because in saying this chord here, we imply that we are in the present. But whether this chord is the middle chord of the Moonlight Sonata or the first chord of another song we won’t know until later.
Person A: I wish I could give an accurate rendition of the Moonlight Sonata without having to play this chord here.
Person A expresses his/her wish (desire, hope, prayer, etc.) that he/she didn’t have to play that chord there in order to render the Moonlight Sonata accurately. Person A may or may not get his/her wish (wishing may seem to others an improbable way for A to get what A wants). But A’s wishing it none the less makes perfect sense.
Person A: I wish I could give an accurate rendition of the Moonlight Sonata without having to play this chord here. I’ll have B play it for me, and my rendition will still be accurate.
I listed the above challenges in what you might consider a descending order of importance. You might believe that #3 is trivial. Still, it may require a small adjustment or change to the theory or its presentation. But such small adjustments add up, and after a number of them are made, they may add up to a substantial change in the theory or its presentation. So it is possible that even small and seemingly unimportant challenges need to at least be considered. Also, we don’t know for sure which issues, if any, Long may consider the most significant for his theory. We can’t assume that every theoretical issue we consider trivial will be considered so by Long.
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